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Darnathiel Wise one
Joined: 02 Jun 2008 Posts: 72 Location: South Carolina
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Posted: Fri Jun 20, 2008 9:36 am Post subject: Fiction: Death of a Balor Lord |
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The group thundered across the desert, their quest known to few, but their
bravery no less for it. In the lead rode the Cleric, Kaelis. His dark armor
and red cloak hid him in the darkness, but the divine power burning in his
eyes lit him from within. He was determined to save their companion,
Elrow, from the Balor Lord. Behind him rode the apparition of death, the
Necromancer, Danuthal, mounted upon a steed plucked from the very
bowels of Hell. It snorted hellfire, and left the scent of brimstone wherever
it trod. Then came Rega Mortis, their erstwhile guide, pointing the way to
the oasis. The shadows seemed to wrap themselves about her, covering
her in a comforting embrace. Last came Dakota Westfield, Necromancer,
her hair shining like quicksilver in the scant moonlight, keeping hold of
their prisoner, the elven mage Elrow. The Balor in Elrow's body cursed and
spat and struggled, but still remained bound. They had been riding for
some time, hounded by creatures from nightmare, demons determined
to reclaim their Lord. They were weary, but the indomitable spirit
which drives all those who seek adventure forced them to continue
riding. Then, the oasis came into sight, but it was filled with demons.
Kaelis gestured for the others to remain back. He rode forward slightly,
marshaling his energies. He threw up his hand, and a small circle of flame
formed within it. In seconds, it streaked across the night like a falling star,
then came to a halt inside the gates of the oasis. There was a momentary
feeling of compression, as if some monstrous creature were taking a deep
breath. Then, the night exploded into an incredible burst of flame and
concussive force. The area was lit like day for miles, and the demons
howled as the hungry flames stripped flesh from bone, then devoured all
that remained.The gate shattered into pieces, and our heroes moved in
to investigate. They found the Succubus once more, but she fled their
sharp blades swiftly, fighting only a short time. Then, they rode back to
Dakota. She had not moved, but Elrow was gone! Kaelis moved closer.
"Where is she?""Where is who?" asked Dakota, smiling slightly. Enraged,
Kaelis thundered "Elrow!" Dakota tilted her head to the side. "You mean the
pretty elven girl?" She shook her head. "I don't know." Without a word,
Kaelis wheeled his steed about and rode out into the desert, seeking Elrow.
The others split up as well, seeking the possessed girl. She was found at
the oasis, standing by the pool of water, gazing into it. Kaelis dismounted,
and walked closer to Elrow. She turned to face him, and held out a hand.
"May I see your sword, Kaelis?" The Cleric frowned, and started to move,
when a flash of red light blinded all who stood nearby. When our heroes
were able to see once more, the Balor stood among them. Standing twenty
feet tall, its skin burned with eldritch flames, and its massive, horned head
glared down at our heroes with eyes that held the Abyss itself, while its
heavily muscled wings slowly flapped behind it. Once more, the
companions almost fell prey to the weariness sapping at their souls, but
drew themselves up, preparing to face this monster of monsters. Behind
them, the Succubus appeared once more, and the Balor spoke.
"Baroness. It is good to see you once more. Now, assist me." The earth
itself shook under the creature's voice, and in the distance a mountain
collapsed. The ears of our heroes bled, and their souls shrank back in
mortal terror. The Succubus lunged forward with a whip, and the group
sprang into action. Rega vanished into the shadows, as Danuthal snapped
a word of command in some dark tongue. His steed disappeared, and a
sword of utter oblivion appeared in his hand. He charged forward at the
Succubus, while Kaelis prepared to battle the Balor. He forced himself to
step forward, drawing his blade. The Balor grinned down at the pathetic
mortal, and drew its own sword, the blade alone larger than Kaelis. It
swung downwards, and Kaelis hefted his blade, moving to parry his foe's.
The swords connected, and Kaelis was driven to the ground on a single
knee. His muscles ached with the strain, and he rolled to the right. As
swiftly as a striking cobra, his blade lashed out, gashing the Balor across
the leg. The lethal blade descended once more, and Kaelis rolled back,
climbing to his feet. He lifted his blade to the sky, and a pillar of divine
energy slammed down upon the Balor, stunning it. Kaelis rushed forward,
determined to end the battle. Behind him, the shadows blurred and twisted
as the Necromancer fought with the Succubus, while Rega struck from the
darkness, then retreated once more into the night. Kaelis struck out with
his weapon once more, but the Balor was not as dazed as he had thought,
and the demon lifted the puny mortal from the ground. Its claws twitched
and the sound of the Cleric's spine shattering echoed throughout the night,
the rush of air from the duel behind him underscoring it. The Balor tossed
the Cleric to the ground as if he were a piece of trash, and turned to deal
with the others. With inhuman will, Kaelis slowly regained his feet, and
lifted his blade once more. The Balor roared, and a great pulse of death
erupted from it, flinging our heroes about. Then, when all seemed lost...
The Balor vanished into thin air. The companions staggered to their feet,
wondering at this miracle. By the pool stood Elrow, holding that which
bound the beast to this world. The Balor was slain.
By the way, if you like what you read, could you PLEASE give me some feedback? Thanks.
© Copyright 2008 Danuthal (UN: danuthal at Writing.Com). All rights reserved. Danuthal has granted Writing.Com, its affiliates and its syndicates non-exclusive rights to display this work. _________________ The Dark One shall be born of the Eisor Sidar'med. He shall fall to Darkness, his twin shall be created, and dwell in Darkness. One shall slay the other, for the power of the Dark One belongs to one alone. The Cycle shall continue, as it must.
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Bofonic Seeker of wisdom
Joined: 05 Jun 2008 Posts: 28
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Posted: Fri Jun 20, 2008 12:25 pm Post subject: |
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I like it because I blow things up.
Seriously though, nice job.
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PhantomSkyfire Initiate
Joined: 03 Jun 2008 Posts: 16 Location: Sterling Heights, Michigan
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Posted: Fri Jun 20, 2008 3:13 pm Post subject: |
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I can't read it. The double-lined format throws me off so badly it might as well be written in gobbledygook. But if it's as good as your other writing, it's probably awesome. _________________ Capitalization is the difference between "I had to help my uncle Jack off a horse" and "I had to help my uncle jack off a horse..."
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Darnathiel Wise one
Joined: 02 Jun 2008 Posts: 72 Location: South Carolina
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Posted: Sat Jun 21, 2008 9:56 am Post subject: |
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Well, it involves a rogue army of squirrels armed with automatic weaponry, attempting to take over the world. ^_^ Since you cannot read it, that is the story in a nutshell. _________________ The Dark One shall be born of the Eisor Sidar'med. He shall fall to Darkness, his twin shall be created, and dwell in Darkness. One shall slay the other, for the power of the Dark One belongs to one alone. The Cycle shall continue, as it must.
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iac Seeker of wisdom
Joined: 21 Apr 2008 Posts: 33 Location: America
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Posted: Sat Jun 21, 2008 8:43 pm Post subject: |
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Darnathiel Wise one
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Posted: Sat Jun 21, 2008 9:08 pm Post subject: |
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Well, it is not really SUPPOSED to be the whole story. Which is why it is entitled "Death of a Balor Lord". _________________ The Dark One shall be born of the Eisor Sidar'med. He shall fall to Darkness, his twin shall be created, and dwell in Darkness. One shall slay the other, for the power of the Dark One belongs to one alone. The Cycle shall continue, as it must.
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iac Seeker of wisdom
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Posted: Tue Jun 24, 2008 12:07 am Post subject: |
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Darnathiel Wise one
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Posted: Wed Jul 02, 2008 10:33 pm Post subject: |
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There were no other demons. Possession interferes with memories. ^_^ _________________ The Dark One shall be born of the Eisor Sidar'med. He shall fall to Darkness, his twin shall be created, and dwell in Darkness. One shall slay the other, for the power of the Dark One belongs to one alone. The Cycle shall continue, as it must.
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iac Seeker of wisdom
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Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2008 3:19 pm Post subject: |
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Really? Than what killed you all? 
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Darnathiel Wise one
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Posted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 2:43 pm Post subject: |
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I almost quite possibly most definitely have completely no clue what you are talking about. _________________ The Dark One shall be born of the Eisor Sidar'med. He shall fall to Darkness, his twin shall be created, and dwell in Darkness. One shall slay the other, for the power of the Dark One belongs to one alone. The Cycle shall continue, as it must.
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iac Seeker of wisdom
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